Friday, 25 March 2016

Chloe's 100 WC

Today is the BEST day of my life, because I going to a chocolate factory. I get to do whatever I want. A small group of us have just entered the Cadbury chocolate factory. As I walked down this amazing hall I can see on the wall rows of  sweet chocolate chips. I just want to lick the chips so bad. I looked up and it looked like Mr Wonka had just invented a bar of chocolate that can fly. I was amazed by what he has invented in the chocolate factory!

 By Chloe
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  1. Kathy @ Team 100WC, Portland, Oregon, USA26 March 2016 at 16:02

    Chloe your story made me hungry for some chocolate! I'd say going to a chocolate factory would certainly qualify for a best day. And how interesting about the flying bar of chocolate - great imagination!

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  2. Anonymous29 March 2016 at 04:56

    I'm loving your 100 word challenge work - Could you please let Room 13 from Stanley Avenue know all about it.

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    1. Anonymous6 April 2016 at 16:39

      So the hundred word challenge is a piece of writing that is limited to 100 or if possible 110.You have a sentence starter for example ," She was shocked to see...." I like it how you have a challenge ,to write a short story starting with a prompt and you are only allowed to write one hundred words

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    2. Anonymous6 April 2016 at 17:03

      Here is the website https://100wc.net/

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  3. Anonymous6 April 2016 at 15:53

    Wow! Chloe I like how you are using your imagination with the flying chocolate bar!

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  6. Anonymous8 May 2016 at 16:03

    Nice job chole

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  7. Anonymous10 May 2016 at 14:25

    Hi Daniel here I like your blog I like the chocolate factory
    story see ya.

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  8. Anonymous10 May 2016 at 14:36

    more writing

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  9. Unknown11 May 2016 at 14:40

    Hello Carlton school
    Liked your writing did you really go to cadbury chocolate factory ? or is it just
    A really awesome story
    By Riley at broadlands school

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