Kai was in his room reading. He heard whispering he thought it was the wind. Then suddenly the door slammed the windows opened ,“I've come to help you,” said a voice coming through the window. “What?“ Kai muttered. “Come “ said the voice again”. Lighting struck and waves were crashing Kai was confused. “Umm who are you and why do you want me"? ”I have a gift for you but hold still". BANG Kai woke he didn't know what had happened. “What happened”? no one answered he looked around and \ then he got up from a chair and started walking he stretched his arms out, lasers came out of his arms. “Ouch what was that? Do I have super powers“? he mumbled “No i'm being silly “ Kai turned around there it was staring right at him…
By Gemma
Gemma your adventurous story was really fun to read! I love how you make it seem a bit spooky and mysterious at the start, and it almost sounds like Kai was in a dream but was he? And the ending leaves so much to the imagination - really nice work!
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Gemma! You have a great imagination. Nice work on your super hero writing!
ReplyDeleteGreat work Gemma you have a amazing superhero. I like how you made me want to read your story.
ReplyDeleteWow Gemma that story was amazing!
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could add more detail to the story.
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Jordan